Overall, it has a quite nice effect. I like his bright eyes especially. Cute Zaff!
Critic: The lines are not smooth enough and since Zaff is mainly black, a bit of lighter areas, especially around the borders, would be good to separate areas like the ears from the rest of the body. There're minor areas which you did not colour (like the last yellow flat on the tip on the tail) which matter a lot especially if you want it to turn out more perfectly.
I had a lovely b/g for the layout which coloured through a lot of the white spaces you were talking about but kasey asked to take it off since she wanted to combine Xaff pictures like the Mineraih layout
Wow Eli... You really did a great job on this... I adore the coloring... especially on the wings as I love the color blending that is there... You might try to make the coloring a bit more 'clean' around the lineart as there are a few white spots within the lineart that aren't colored. Mainly around the eyes and claws though. This is adorable though, I love the little fang that is showing. ^^
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I really like the coloring on the wing
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Critic: The lines are not smooth enough and since Zaff is mainly black, a bit of lighter areas, especially around the borders, would be good to separate areas like the ears from the rest of the body. There're minor areas which you did not colour (like the last yellow flat on the tip on the tail) which matter a lot especially if you want it to turn out more perfectly.
You might also want to add a bg to make it nicer.
wong_look_kwang2003
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